Small Floating Things (Past Masuda/Yamashita)

Oct 21, 2011 04:23

Small Floating Things
Past Masuda/Yamashita.

Notes: This is entirely self-indulgence and not written for anyone else. I imagine there's going to many other fics with the same cliche, just with different pairings. Still posted this here, but I don't expect other people to like this at all. I don't dare try to sympathize with Yamapi now, and I can't ( Read more... )

p: masuda/yamashita, c: masuda takahisa, c: yamashita tomohisa, g: news

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lemonadetea November 21 2011, 03:27:30 UTC
;_; I'd been wanting Pi breakup fic! Thanks. :)

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digitalized_ November 21 2011, 20:01:07 UTC
Oh, ah, glad I could offer that? :D Thanks for reading ♥

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grydo2life November 21 2011, 03:28:52 UTC
Oh.

This is beautiful. Painful and so sad, but absolutely gorgeous. I love your characterizations here; it felt very real and so much like them. But the thing I like about this the most is that it's very soft, if that makes any sense. The whole thing is subtle in just the right ways, and even though the ending is a touch sad, it also feels very resolved.

In short: utter brilliance. Thank you so much for sharing :)

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digitalized_ November 21 2011, 20:27:44 UTC
Thank you for the lovely comment <3 It's wonderful to know that the characterization worked for you! This comment totally made my day :D

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