Fic: The Tide Is Rising (I Want the Ocean)

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Title: The Tide Is Rising (I Want the Ocean)
Characters: Brittany Pierce/Santana Lopez
Length: 4k
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: Through I Kissed A Girl
Summary: The commercial had brought Santana a lot of unwanted looks and attention from the people of Lima. And for Brittany, this was the most unwanted attention of all.
A/N: This was written for my dearest

Comments

[singerofsongs]

Even better than I thought it would be, which is saying something. I hope this means you'll be writing more fic in the future?

Although, I'm calling into question this whole "i've never written smut before"...sure you haven't ;)

[gilliang3]

HAWT.

[mayonegg]

Fuck that was delicious. It had everything I love in a fic. And I don't see why you were worried about this coming out well; it's very well-written. Also, your Brittany is great, nothing to worry about on that front either.

“More,” Santana begs. Brittany knows her girlfriend can’t take anymore fingers so she speeds up her thrusting, her arm moving in staccato beats.

Might be my favorite part. I like how it conveys well Brittany knows Santana.

[luciad2]

Pretty fucking amazing, bb. I knew it would be. Your smut was hot as hell.

I hope you continue to write :)

[musicffyou]

haha wow..that was awesome! I love it when Britt gets a little possessive. Thanks for the post