Title: "The Affair"
Fandom: Final Fantasy VIII, after ending.
Pairing: RinoaxSquall (yes, in that order)
Word Count: 2811
Why the fuck am I doing this? It was
yinake ’s request in my torture me meme: Write a Squall/Rinoa drabble. :DDDDD I do not think she was expecting this at all though. I feel SICK. But, ya know what, it was going to be terrible anyway,
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yay I'm descriptive
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Not what I was expecting, but BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA and hooray on the ending XD
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Annnywaays, thanks. Um, can I ask you something? You've been a writer for quite awhile. I'm I really bad? This one was a quicky, but its generally how I write. Just wondering since FF.net is no place to get honest answers most of the time. There's only 1 fanfiction that I've ever written that I know a decent amount of people love.
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Overall, I'd say just keep practicing! I mean, no one was ever born a good writer, they all learned how to write along the way. In general, I also think that things like unpolished writing have never stopped anyone from having a dedicated readership - after all, most people read stories for the, well, story, and not to fap to the pretty metaphors. (...which I should learn myself, lol).
In any case, I enjoyed this. <3
Tell me if you want me to give you details on where it seems unpolished.
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YES, please, details! I want to improve. Rip it apart. I'm all for it. In fact my main fanfiction, which is written way better and has quite a bit of readers ( probably because I a have the characterization down) is almost coming to an end and I want the final two chapters to be the best they can be. Thank you!
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