Reconstruction - Epilogue

Oct 29, 2011 00:30


Epilogue 
The next month Reid was attentive, polite to Luke’s mother, did everything that Luke asked without complaint.  And it was freaking Luke out.  Reid had brought home take-out from Al’s and they were eating dinner.  Reid never once reached across the table to take one of Luke’s fries and this was enough for Luke.

“Reid, what’s up with you?”

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sleeper6 November 3 2011, 21:37:24 UTC
Oh, this was such a fantastic story. I enjoyed it even with all the Noah moments in it and the sad moments too. It's good that Reid knew how important Luke was to him after all and how much he wanted to be with him and needed him. I especially liked how you used canon moments to show us what Reid does differently this time or what he's thinking.

Excellent fic, and I approve of the ending. Not everything can just go back to normal. The guys need to repair their relationship slowly, and they will because they do belong together, no doubts about that.

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ditzybea November 5 2011, 05:24:25 UTC
Thanks so much!
Being a fan of yours, your comments mean a lot.

I have to admit that it was really fun to write the canon moments from Reid's perspective. I wish I could have added more snark, but I think it all turned out all right.

I'm glad that you liked the ending. I try to make my stories as real as I can.

Thanks for commenting! :)

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tldreamer November 3 2011, 22:42:47 UTC
I thoroughly enjoyed your story and am so glad you shared it with us!

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ditzybea November 5 2011, 05:47:24 UTC
I'm so glad that you enjoyed it.
Thanks for all your nice comments.

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shaniali November 3 2011, 23:32:32 UTC
I can go to sleep with a smile on my face thank you :)
you made a great job, I loved the way you rewrote things , it was clever :-)

So Gretchen was really an angel, huh ? I guess we'll never know and I'm glad they're taking things slow

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ditzybea November 5 2011, 05:11:13 UTC
Thanks for all your sweet comments!

I was afraid that copying the canon would look like a cop-out, but Reid was reliving his life over and things were going to repeat.

Is Gretchen an angel? I leave that up to the readers. She is an angel or just someone who keeps everything in balance. That is all up you guys.

I am so glad that you liked it!

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jeb423 November 4 2011, 01:23:44 UTC
OMG It was beautiful from beginning to end...Cried hard the last few chapters, but just wow...

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ditzybea November 5 2011, 05:50:11 UTC
Sorry I made you cry...or am I?
Happiness through tears is the best way kind of story!

I'm glad that you liked it!

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marsabi November 4 2011, 11:58:39 UTC
Lots of twists and turns. A very emotional ride. I'm glad it worked out-whew!

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ditzybea November 5 2011, 05:53:07 UTC
My stories are a bit of a rollercoaster.
Perhaps I should put that in the author notes...it's a thought.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

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