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[divine_tragedy_]

I feel good, I'm at Delta right now. I just finished touching up my paper that I was worried about. And I have class in about 30 minutes, so that's liek 15 minutes of free time. :D. Anywhoo. I decided I'm going to post the paper. I know it's not very good but tell me what you think about it.

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[junkeyfish1]

“A 12-year-old boy said he was acting out an anti-terrorist video game when he fatally shot his younger brother, according to authorities.” This is the first line of an article from www.sfgate.com posted November 30, 2001. It tell how the boys were playing a violent anti-terrorist game when the young brother wanted to make it more real. He then took a pistol from a bookshelf; the pistol appeared empty but had a single round in the chamber. When the older brother tried to take the gun away from his younger sibling the gun was fired. Sfgate.com is a common site for any violent crime where the person, usually a youth, had been known to play video games. The articles usually focus more on the video games and less on the more obvious facts, such as why the young boys were playing a game clearly marked “T,” which means for children 13 and above, or why their father had a gun lying around with a single bullet in the chamber of what looked like an unloaded gun. In recent years video games have been receiving the blame for many violent crimes

[junkeyfish1]

Drat, I edited the whole paper and it messed up on me. lol. Sorry babe, I'll take a look at it when I get home tonight, I hope it wasn't due today. It's pretty good in your ideas, just a few technical errors. the rest are suggestions. ttyl!

[anonymous]

haha u dont kno how to fuckin write a paper there r so many mistakes dude