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Counterplay: Part III (Ch.7)

Jul 02, 2012 17:37

Author: diviniaserit
Artist:agent_era
Link to art: http://snowbunny91.deviantart.com/art/Mentalist-RBB-Counterplay-312106390
Word Count:9032
Rating: T
Summary: Counterplay: In chess; Active maneuvering by the player in an inferior or defensive position. "No one would remain unscathed- that's just who Red John was."
Disclaimer: Not mine!
Notes: Written in a collaboration with ( Read more... )

the mentalist, fic, rbb, mentalist_bb, fanfic

Comments 7

agent_era July 2 2012, 23:22:38 UTC

Whoo-hah! It's done! It went by way to fast. I hope we can do another collab some some day. It was great fun working with you!

tromana July 3 2012, 14:52:04 UTC

I read this all last night and will review each chapter individually later but I wanted to comment here first anyway.

FIRSTLY: Congratulotions on FINALLY completing a Big Bang fic!!!! :p 3rd time was clearly the charm. ;-)

Secondly: Yay! Lisbon&Cho friendship!angst. That was so much fun. I also loved the interpretation of Red John so much. It was such a unique portrayal of him.

Now, I'll just say more when it makes it onto ffn. :)

diviniaserit July 3 2012, 15:49:32 UTC

Heeee, thank ya ma'am! I have to admit- it was kind of fun posting first :) I definitely enjoyed this, and I'm super glad I finally finished one of these! Now, to crank out Whispering and all will be well ;)

Esther said there wasn't nearly enough Cho fic out there and she's right! Of course, I can't seem to write anything without Lisbon, and we always need more Lisbon/Cho friendship fic! I often wonder about their relationship and how Jane affected everything. I can really see Cho being her confidant early on- even though she'd still keep him at a distance. RJ was soooo much fun to write on this! Crazy villains are awesome- and I could totally picture RJ being in plain sight!

YAY stories!

little_firestar July 7 2012, 21:37:09 UTC

div, I really have no words to describe this fic. lisbon is just on top of her, the saint teresa we've benen getting to know along the years, selfless, always there for the others, putting herslef second, and Cho... cho's so.... so human, different from he tries to look like to an outsider eye. and the last part? real thriller!
good work, and hope everything is gping well and you keep feeling better!

diviniaserit July 16 2012, 04:19:46 UTC

Thank you so much! I love writing LIsbon- and she would definitely do anything for anyone on her team. Cho was fun to write! I really enjoyed writing more of him! And RJ was so much fun to write this way! Yay for crazy genius serial killers! Hahahahaah. I've been feeling off, but starting to get better. Been very sore lately. blah! thanks again!

kielamyis July 9 2012, 08:22:22 UTC

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh!!! This was awesome! Cho & Lisbon friendship, action, Red John, angst, injuries, cliffhanger... I have no words good enough for the awesomeness of this fic! :D

diviniaserit July 16 2012, 04:17:56 UTC

Thank you so much!! I'm so glad you liked this one- I was a little unsure of it! I've never written so much Cho before! But RJ was SO much fun to write in this one :) Thank you again! Yay for reviews!!