When Rukia awakes she finds herself, not for the first time, in the heart of Sereitei, sprawled over Ichigo's chest in the middle of the street
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Oh wow. That was amazing! Thw whole argument at the beginning (well, okay, the snark throughout the entire chapter, really) and the biting and the minute man, and oh. And then Rukia daring him to prove it, and being totally shocked when he actually DOES.
And Ichigo saying that he likes Rukia's breasts over Matsumoto's and Inoue's!
This was probably my favourite line: She points her nose in the air the way they taught her before the ceremony that made her adoption into Kuchiki house official.It's absolutely hilarious and so would have happened (though unofficially, sigh
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I have a thing for stories that mess with the usual order of romance and UST, so I got a kick out of giving them orgasms here before they make it to the kissing. I have a few more hurdles for this Ichigo and Rukia to jump through, but hopefully the kissing will be that much more satsifying when they finally do get there. :p
I'm so glad you think the characterization works. These two are so tricky around sex. *g*
I'm so glad, heh, not like that was my evil plan or anything - I wouldn't want to encourage you to write more soon, nope, not me! *whistles* *innocently* !
I like it when the traditionals are messed with, so it's a win-win situation for us! And hurdles are good - it's the up and downs in life that make it interesting. Otherwise, we'd all be terribly bored and left to make up our own entertainment, and well, that didn't go over so well when the Victorians did it. Blood sports and all, you know.
<3 <3 God and after your contest entry, I thought it couldn't get any better... well... I was wrong!! *spin spin* I love following this journal. It's so much love~ <3
Heeee, thank you! So glad the hand licking is going over well, it was really kind of a surprise that came up when tenebris and I were outlining this and went, "huh, what are they going to do about lube?"
lol! It would seem kind of weird if they would have had lubrication with them... >>;;
But it's a very sexy concept, hand-licking. It's just one of those things that people don't really think about until they see/read it being done... then they are like "that's so hot *blush*"
This was awesome. To make them start off as bickering children and end up with smut in the back of an alley WORKS. (soooo much better than the emo ---> smut timeline that some other fics take)
Rukia comparing Ichigo's youknowwhat to a puppy? GOLD.
Thank you so much for this! I always look forward to your writing.
And heee, thanks! It has always seemed to me that these two would get together with as much snark and dumbassery as possible. I'm so glad you agree. ^_^
The ugly puppy thing is possibly my favorite part of this. Rukia surprised me with that comparison but I decided to run with it. :p
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Oh wow. That was amazing! Thw whole argument at the beginning (well, okay, the snark throughout the entire chapter, really) and the biting and the minute man, and oh. And then Rukia daring him to prove it, and being totally shocked when he actually DOES.
And Ichigo saying that he likes Rukia's breasts over Matsumoto's and Inoue's!
This was probably my favourite line: She points her nose in the air the way they taught her before the ceremony that made her adoption into Kuchiki house official.It's absolutely hilarious and so would have happened (though unofficially, sigh ( ... )
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I have a thing for stories that mess with the usual order of romance and UST, so I got a kick out of giving them orgasms here before they make it to the kissing. I have a few more hurdles for this Ichigo and Rukia to jump through, but hopefully the kissing will be that much more satsifying when they finally do get there. :p
I'm so glad you think the characterization works. These two are so tricky around sex. *g*
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I like it when the traditionals are messed with, so it's a win-win situation for us! And hurdles are good - it's the up and downs in life that make it interesting. Otherwise, we'd all be terribly bored and left to make up our own entertainment, and well, that didn't go over so well when the Victorians did it. Blood sports and all, you know.
By the way, may I friend you?
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Glad you enjoy the up and down! Because Ichigo-torture, it is kind of a Thing with me.
And of COURSE you can friend me! ♥
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Yay!
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<3 <3 God and after your contest entry, I thought it couldn't get any better... well... I was wrong!! *spin spin* I love following this journal. It's so much love~ <3
Hand licking is my new fetish after reading this!
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But it's a very sexy concept, hand-licking. It's just one of those things that people don't really think about until they see/read it being done... then they are like "that's so hot *blush*"
Or that's how I was! haha!
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and yay! PORN!
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This was awesome. To make them start off as bickering children and end up with smut in the back of an alley WORKS. (soooo much better than the emo ---> smut timeline that some other fics take)
Rukia comparing Ichigo's youknowwhat to a puppy? GOLD.
Thank you so much for this! I always look forward to your writing.
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And heee, thanks! It has always seemed to me that these two would get together with as much snark and dumbassery as possible. I'm so glad you agree. ^_^
The ugly puppy thing is possibly my favorite part of this. Rukia surprised me with that comparison but I decided to run with it. :p
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