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[divvy]

a little less 16 candles, a little more touch me, 2006
the sacrifice of life; so long as we keep our bodies numb we're safe
travis / william, gabe / william, 6811 words (nc17)

-- here is why you're sad: you're miserable when he is close, so take another drink, another drink will numb those senses and make the most of flesh and bones if it helps

Comments

[hello_ilu]

....agoihafoigahpweh AGH. ♥ have i mentioned that you are awesome?

............agh agh agh agh.

.....and a part two?!?

[divvy]

asdfghjkl thank you :[

and of course there's a part two, silly, all of this simply couldn't be left unresolved

[hello_ilu]

yay yay yay yay yay.

awesome, i tell you.

[divvy]

you are clearly the one that is awesome, duh

[divvy]

I LIKE THAT YOU ARE AS OBNOXIOUS AS I FEEL RIGHT NOW :]

gabilliam and treckett and treckgabe are my favourite things too especially when two of them are vampires ahhh amazing, i am so glad to have made you like vampire fics, i love writing them and i love midtown too

[fabien_aybara]

EPIC WIN. SUCH EPIC WIN. I CAN'T WAIT FOR PETE!!! [I am not so secretly in love with him...]

[I agree on the technicalities of vampires. They are too complicated. I also think that one should forget all about the speech mannerisms of the 17th century when one is writing a Treckett fic set in the time period. :D]

GABE. HE, HE, ASDKL;GJWULFJ248QTY@$"y!!!! ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ I LUFFS HIM SO MUCH AND YOU WRITE HIM SO WONDERFULLY AND I SHOULD BE STUDYING FOR MY UPCOMING EXAMS BUT I COULDN'T IGNORE THE FIC ANYMORE.

I LOVE YOU. A LOT. I COULD BUILD YOU A SHRINE.

TRECKETT IS SO PERFECT. :DDDDDDDDD

[And I totally luffs the Maja. And Shaant. He steals my soul.]

YOU ROCK. <33333333333333333333333333333333333333

[I think I can't actually write a proper comment the first time when it comes to you...This is bad? Y/N?]

[divvy]

haha just to clarify, the fic takes place in 2006, maja, gabe and william are the only ones who saw anything of the 1700's, the rest of he dandies joined in the 2000's! travis' vocabulary is perfectly fine

GO STUDY

i'm glad you enjoyed this so much :[

[fabien_aybara]

...that was me referencing to the fact that I am attempting to write my first bandslash fic and have completely and utterly disregarded the 1700's speech mannerisms.

Your fic is perfectly acceptable in all it's terminology and Travis talkingness.

I was...except that I called my friend when she sent me this long email about how awesome MCR was and I sent her one picspammed with Mikeyway pictures [because he is the pretty] and she sent me one back and I was like, it's best if I just call her. And now I am still on the phone with her...:[

I will leave you a massive comment on the second part. Promise.

[divvy]

i am an idiot and did not understand but now i do and OH! i will have to read this fic when it is completed

it has been a few hours so i am going to assume you studied because school is important young lady!

[karisma94]

WOW THAT WAS AWESOME OH I CANT WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPIE YA

[divvy]

;)

[haha_urdead]

Okay so I totally like read this out of order and everything, but I totally like it alot! I feel so bad for everyone in this (except for Maja, she's kind of a bitch, but she has her reasons: she wants her family to stay safe)

My only qualm with this is the lack of capitalization. Everything else is great (grammar, spelling, spacing of dialogue). You may have a reason for not capitalize everything, but honestly, it makes it really hard to read, but I'm going to keep plowing along because I really like the plot and everything else!

[divvy]

my original reason for not using capitals is because my shift key broke for a very long time and i wasn't used to using the other shift key. okay, that's a lie. i go to university and spend all of my time writing things properly and making sure i don't miss one capital letter but it's exhausting having to be proper when i'm off duty, so to speak. i'm really pete wentz. honestly, i just don't like capitals and i'm sorry that it makes things difficult, i know a lot of people are annoyed by it but it's just the way i write. some of my fics have capitals but some of them just... don't. i'm sorry? i am happy that you enjoyed this though, it's one of my favorite things that i've written.