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[divvy]

the way to there
gabe / william, 1065 words

Comments

[tehlinzors]

I really enjoyed this. And your dislike of capital letters, are you a fan of e.e cummings perhaps? Haha. I was just wondering because in all of his work he would never capitalize 'I' because it was his way of expressing that a person's physical being was meaningless and lacking in extravagance. I know he rarely capitalized anything too. If I'm completely off the mark here, sorry. XDD

This was a great story though, very simple and I liked that. It's very hard for most people to write a beautiful story while keeping it very simple. You did a great job. ^^

[divvy]

the amusing thing is, i'm not a huge fan of ee cummings. i've read his work but it doesn't blow me away. i suppose i just enjoy the aesthetic of all capital letters. to me it just means that nothing is more important than something else, that each word in each sentences will impact your heart and your head the same way. nothing should be overlooked.

i wonder if that makes any sense.

thank you for reading it though and i'm so glad you enjoyed it.

[dearlove_ilyy]

I can't even begin to explain how much I love this. It completely blew me away. <3

[divvy]

this comment made me smile so wide. thank you so very much.

[anonymous]

Beautiful. Absolutely stunning.

[divvy]

thank you :[

[gabebeckett_xo]

this is..
just beautiful, amazing, great.
You are a great writer for this; its perfect.
<3

[divvy]

oh thank you, so so so much.

[circlesanthem]

OH MY GOD, this was amazing. and sad. but soooo good.

[divvy]

i hope it wasn't too sad, the ending way happy! thank you so much.