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[divvy]

the academy is; rise of the fall tour series, 2003
logan to government center (prelude)
mike / william, 4445 words (nc17)

-- i never thought this day would end, i never thought tonight could ever be this close to me, so let my hands stray past the boundaries of your back to get you breathing and get this started

Comments

[turnthisaround]

i love this, it's so good.
amazing job =D

[divvy]

why thank you, darlin

[x_smartie]

I didn't even NOTICE the lack of capitals until you said about it xP

And this, MADE OF WIN
<3
So completely.

[divvy]

i'm glad it went unnoticed!

and thank you kindly, it makes me happy to know you liked it

[laurenlobster]

you know I always love your stuff.
It hit the spot as always.

[divvy]

the love is mutual

[thereallizfresh]

can i say i love you?
cause if i can...
i do :]

[divvy]

i love you too, darlin

[magic_soakingxx]

this is just so right y'know? it feels natural and organic and believable (although that kinda makes it sound like a smoothie)and beautiful. really, your words just fit perfectly. i'm not making sense and i'm using the word "and" too many times, but this is just overwhelmingly wonderful.

please don't ever stop writing, you've got oodles of talent

(i used to always want a william, but now i kinda think i want a mike. although that's probably one of the hardest decisions ever)

:)didz

[divvy]

i like your smoothie analogy, though! thank you so much, and if i can help it i will never stop writing, i'll hire someone to write for me when i get carpal tunnel. i overuse and as well, i just like it.

and i always want a mike, always. a william would be good too, but only if they came as a packaged deal that i could observe and write about