"One Love"

[dizzy_damon]

Tell me what you guys think

I wrote this the  other day... I just want you opinion on how it sounds..

"One Love"
Times will tell what is to be
Alone agaqin she left he
Long ago he had his time
Love was the last thing on his mind

He finally grew up and realized his dreams
She's already gone or so it seems
Begs, and waits only for her

Comments

Wow...

[anonymous]

Hey Buddy! It's your favorite JESS! I haven't read one of your poems in FOREVER, and I can honestly say they have improved so much--that was really good! Hhhmmm...wonder who it is about...? :) Trust me, I know she can be completely confusing. We have all gotten used to her now knowing what she wants. Some people just have to decide how long they will wait...Love you Dames!