15 minute fic :: The Jump

[dizzy_liz]

I just had a blast with Fran, Emily, Pete and Mum. I suggested we all do some ficlets together and the idea was embraced with enthusiasm! Then we all read our pieces aloud to each other, blushing and laughing, kicking fear in the face.

Title: The Jump
Fandom/original: Original, but heavily influenced by both Alias and a number of war/adventure

Comments

[bluiidmommy]

I like it, but think it would be stronger without so many adjectives.

[dizzy_liz]

Yes, it was rather wordy hey? Thanks for the feedback!

[bluiidmommy]

I love your icon!

[paulini]

Good work, kido. ;)