[SCI 8x3] Second Look

Mar 01, 2012 20:38

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pixiebelle March 2 2012, 17:42:12 UTC
What a cool take on the topic! I love the last part about how he had succeeded but just had to go back for a second look...

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dizzydog March 6 2012, 01:57:08 UTC
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it :D Boys just have to push their luck until someone gets hurt :)

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____hejira March 2 2012, 19:03:44 UTC
Wow. Different take on the topic. Like it. Good work.

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dizzydog March 6 2012, 01:58:26 UTC
Thanks! It took forever to come up with an idea this time, glad it turned out well and you liked it :D

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karmasoup March 2 2012, 20:46:28 UTC
Aheh.... I always thought she was pretty sexy, too. in this case, though, the price of being a peeping tom is a bit on the high side! ;)

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dizzydog March 6 2012, 02:05:53 UTC
Yeah, the penalty was a bit stiff! ;D

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basric March 2 2012, 21:57:20 UTC
A nice addendum on an old tale.

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dizzydog March 6 2012, 02:11:01 UTC
Thanks! Enjoyed trying this type of story :D

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shimmerdream March 3 2012, 23:26:12 UTC
Oh, great story. I take it he turned to stone?

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dizzydog March 6 2012, 02:12:18 UTC
I picture him turned to stone but still alive, doomed to spend forever as a living statue peeking in on her and contemplating what he did :)

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