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cheshire23 May 12 2014, 00:46:33 UTC

“And the best plan of all for when the heroes arrive? Don’t be here.”

Definitely the very best plan. :)

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dizzydog May 12 2014, 18:22:03 UTC
Being a bystander always looks a bit dangerous around these folks ;)

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adoptedwriter May 12 2014, 11:48:09 UTC
I like the flow of dialogue here. AW

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dizzydog May 12 2014, 18:23:32 UTC
Thanks! When I was first writing it out I was afraid it might get a bit monologue-ish, then I realized it's Avengers fic, and they do spend a lot of time doing that :D

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mistearyusdiva2 May 12 2014, 12:10:12 UTC
I enjoyed reading this ... action packed and dialogues with a punch .... Well Done

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dizzydog May 12 2014, 18:24:05 UTC
Thanks you! It was a lot of fun to write, so I think I'll be doing more in the future when I can :D

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kajel May 12 2014, 14:22:45 UTC
lol Nice. Definitely don't be here is a good idea.

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dizzydog May 12 2014, 18:24:51 UTC
It really is, this is not a dainty group careful of what's around them :D Thanks!

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bleodswean May 12 2014, 14:28:06 UTC
*claps* THOROUGHLY enjoyable!

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dizzydog May 12 2014, 18:25:43 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it, it was a lot of fun! :D I think I'll be doing more of this when topics allow for it :)

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