LJI 11 W0: Intro

Sep 18, 2019 23:14

It's time for homecoming, no more roaming, get back to the home we're always in within our skin. You enter the door, wanderin' your way across the floor, surrounded by this lore of yours you made in days before. Brush your fingers across the boxes that store the things you've done. Some for fun, some you must, but one by one you put them down to ( Read more... )

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alycewilson September 22 2019, 01:10:03 UTC
I like the use of rhyme. Welcome back!

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dizzydog September 22 2019, 01:26:30 UTC
Thank you for both! :D It's good to be back, it's like a reunion seeing old friends again.

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d0gs September 22 2019, 13:51:43 UTC
This has such a beautiful and dreamy feel!

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alexanderscttb September 23 2019, 17:49:11 UTC

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halfshellvenus September 24 2019, 22:46:54 UTC
I liked the internal rhyming and the lyricism to this.

Let the new stories begin!

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marlawentmad September 24 2019, 23:33:02 UTC
I loved the feeling of this in my mouth.

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