LJI 11 W2: Let Them In

[dizzydog]

Grandma warned me not to let them in. She knew before I did, saw the way I'd get distracted with nothin' going on. Back then it was like a faint breeze you didn't know where it came from, the buzz of a fly you couldn't find, a sound outside you couldn't identify thru the closed window. She said it'd get stronger and they'd tempt me to listen. But

Comments

[tigrkittn]

[kittenboo]

The opening pulls you right in, beautifully done.

[dizzydog]

Thank you! :D

[sweeny_todd]

that... was a thousand percent more happy and positive than I thought it was going to be! nice work!

[dizzydog]

*evil happy giggle!* Hee hee hee hee hee! I love a good creepy, disturbing tale, especially as we get into October... but not just yet :D Thank you! :D

[pixiebelle]

This ended up really nice. I liked how they eventually learned to let others in - and saw it as a positive, beautiful thing. Well done.

[me_sonrei]

This was sweet and thoroughly enjoyable. Well written!