LJI 11 W5: The Betrayal

[dizzydog]

I stumble down the hall in the dark, trying to maintain silence as I clutch at my abdomen. Getting caught is not an option. The pain is intense, and I briefly stop as the cold sweats wash over me. Broken bones, kidney stones, none of them hurt like this. It takes all my willpower to suck in a breath and not groan out loud, count to three to gather

Comments

[static_abyss]

This was amazing! It was so clever, and the ending was magnificent. Well done!

[kittenboo]

Ha! Well done, love the twist!

[nikkiii_brown]

XD
Poor Gerald! The heart wants what the stomach can't handle!

[adoptedwriter]

So good! Very relatable! Food is indeed sometimes our enemy!

[ellison]

Why does delicious food have to treat us so?? hehe