LJI Week 8: Copper, Silver, Gold

[dizzydog]

Captain Roger Bullock looked around them, peering thru the trees and the fog, and occasionally checked the small flat box in his hand. Finally satisfied, he tucked it inside his dark blue jacket. He nodded to his sergeant and sighed

Comments

[adoptedwriter]

Love the concluding paragraph.

[karmasoup]

I love knowing what was in that pocket locket. I hope he sees them again some day. I love this. Such a simple, but amazing tale of courage, sorcery, and what's best in life. <3

[kdb22]

This felt like a scene from a movie I was already watching.

[millysdaughter]

Yes. He does know what matters.

[rayaso]

This was a great idea, and you did a wonderful job with it. I loved the end.