LJI Week 11 Part 2: ♪ If the Creek Don't Rise, Then Our Sorrows Will ♪

[dizzydog]

A curse blights the land, to the north of our homes

Comments

[static_abyss]

I love a good rhyming poem. You did excellent here, and I really enjoyed this take on the prompt.

[karmasoup]

Oh, what a penny dreadfully bleak world! The rhythm here is great.

[halfshellvenus]

You know what they say, "Vampires, schmampires." No wait, no they don't. :O

I liked this quite a lot, especially the refrain and the unfolding of the story as people are sharpening their spears and preparing to fight.

The preacher left town, he left us to die.
Damn! But also, awesome as a story point!