[LJI 11 SC 3] What's A Vacation?

Feb 29, 2020 18:51

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beeker121 March 2 2020, 00:06:03 UTC
I enjoyed his comparison that all of us in cubicles have commutes and tend to work off hours too - the 40 hour work week is pretty dead all over. This pulled me right through, and as someone who doesn't game at all I frequently get lost.

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karmasoup March 2 2020, 01:25:02 UTC
I absolutely love this pro's response to that needler. This is also a perfect take on the prompt, as well, and one I even considered taking myself, but, sadly, it would have had to have been fiction, as I, unfortunately, am not living the dream, but stuck in a cube. Mad props to this, though! <3

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banana_galaxy March 2 2020, 04:15:25 UTC
My kids watch videos of people playing video games. I'm still amazed that this is an actual career people make money on these days.

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lawchicky March 2 2020, 16:49:23 UTC
I love some video games, but they really do suck you in. I find myself not playing them at all anymore because otherwise I could spend three or four hours sitting in front of the TV and I just don't have that kind of time these days!

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adoptedwriter March 2 2020, 21:24:14 UTC
The dialogue works well in this. Lots of "showing" instead of all "telling".

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