YGO 5D's Fanfic: The Nightmare

[dj_madusa]

“N-noo! It hurts!!” A woman screamed in splitting pain hard enough to wake up a young man.

‘huh…?’ The man thought as his eyes opened halfway. His eyelids were heavy like iron while he felt throbbing pains in his head. His weak body started to react to the situation, realizing he was in a pitch black room.

“AKI!!” The man shouted the moment he

Comments

[dancingkirby]

Poor deluded Yusei, thinking that Aki's still a virgin. I think Divine took care of that long before Aki met Yusei. :P

It's weird that you posted this now, since I just had a dream about them. These actually occur fairly often, and in varying degrees of explicitness.

[karnimolly]

It's not quite my cup of tea, but still thank you for thinking of me ^__^

[dj_madusa]

Im sorry, i was trying something new but i faild at it. I'll make it up to you, i promise, you could ask me for something else, just name it. I'm the kind of person who don't want to see people get upset, and especially on your birthday, could you forgive me for this? Just ask me for anything, it'll be a free commission.

[winhall]

Hey there...

You do know that this depiction of the pairing (and their relationship to Yusei) is just about everything Molly hates...? ^^;;

The very basic idea (as I see it) is good: Divine sees Aki as a weapon; she's a useful tool to him before she is a person. He manipulates her and she in return admires him.
How you interpret that relationship is, of course, up to you. But if you write a story for someone's birthday and dedicate it to them, you might want to take into account what they think of the characters. Why would Molly, who loves the relationship between Divine and Aki, want to read a fic about Yusei's nightmare in which he pines for Aki and has to watch Divine rape her and then gets raped by Aki

[dj_madusa]

Yeah you're right. I guess i was trying something new but again i just fail at fanfictions... Epicly fail at them...very... I actually had another idea to right but i thought she would hate it, well it turns out this doesn't work either. Now i feel bad, i should have made her something better, hope she's not too upset, was she? Honestly, tell me if she was, i'll make it up to her.

[winhall]

I think she was really happy with the fanart you drew for her. =)
Maybe your views of the pairing just differ too much for fanfic exchange? That's no big drama, but there it is. ^^;;