just writting without stopping to block my thoughts. just me.

Feb 02, 2006 22:36

You bitch, you hide in the shadows of love
parading a happy face when you cause tears
the fears and pains grow with these few years
let's talk, smile, no, not that, is this enough?
Don't tell me were happy here, in this, this place
what will we become when free from this grasp
a lock from the past, these things won't last
will they? I don't know if I ( Read more... )

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water_junkie February 3 2006, 06:52:02 UTC
I like this. I like the rhythmn you create that's not quite there, but still is present. I wish I could write with passion and feeling like this.

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djhawk February 4 2006, 07:56:43 UTC
sigh. it's not paticularly good but thankyou.

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djhawk February 4 2006, 07:55:04 UTC
this passion for mythology will be my end ( ... )

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