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Second Chances, for soblonde1202

Jul 01, 2007 20:28

Title: Second Chances
Author: leopardchic79
Recipient: SoBlonde1202
Rating: PG-13
Author's Notes: Prompt for story: “A particularly bad case gets to Martin, and he begins to break down before he even gets home...but, Danny's there to put him back together.” I loved the prompt, but had a frustrating time finding my muses for a while …however, my beta claims it’s fabulous ( Read more... )

challenge fic: summer 2007

Comments 10

smilla02 July 1 2007, 20:38:19 UTC

The case was so creepy. I had to stop for a moment before going back to eading. No wonder that it had Martin all twisted up.

I love that you leave things not completely solved bewteen them, only a hint that there's hope for their relationship. A great story!

le_mot_mo July 1 2007, 21:46:50 UTC

mondeo July 1 2007, 23:22:37 UTC

Whoa, no wonder the case screwed Martin up. It's really creepy. It makes the story seem more real though. And I like how you didn't try to give it a neat little ending, it totally makes sense that way.

pompeygirl27 July 2 2007, 10:14:44 UTC

God, that was beautiful, poignant. It really struck a chord. I hate the way Martin always seems so lonely and alone in the show. This really makes up for it.

The fandom needs this! Thanks for sharing.

rilestar July 2 2007, 10:17:28 UTC

::shivers:: The things you do to poor Martin! I *so* could not do that job. :*-( I'm glad that Danny went back, and that you gave some hope for the future.