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Don't Look Back, for leopardchic79

Jul 04, 2007 13:59

Title: Don’t Look Back
Author: mondeo
Recipient: leopardchic79
Rating: PG-13
Author's Notes: I don’t own Without a Trace, because if I did Elena wouldn’t have been allowed near the show. The lyrics don’t belong to me either, so please don’t sue. And thanks to whoever’s car alarm was going off all night because it helped me stay up and finish this fic.
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challenge fic: summer 2007

Comments 12

_dragoonqueen July 4 2007, 12:22:01 UTC

-dies-

-tis a good death NO WORRIES-

mondeo July 22 2007, 11:01:28 UTC

Thank you!

Oh, and I have to say ICON LOVE xD

le_mot_mo July 4 2007, 16:34:01 UTC

mondeo July 22 2007, 11:02:24 UTC

Thanks =) It was the first time I'd written either of them so I'm glad you thought it was in character!

smilla02 July 4 2007, 17:41:21 UTC

Your Danny and Martin voices are so strong. Both of them so nsecure, so completely off-the track, fumbling with this relationship and inable to cope. There was a point while I was reading your story that I wanted to close them in a room and throw away the key (and it's a feeling I've had so many times watching the show, so it's a big compliment ;). Oh boys!

I think I may be a little bit in love with this story!

mondeo July 22 2007, 11:03:40 UTC

Wow, thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed it.

leopardchic79 July 4 2007, 18:59:31 UTC

Oh thank you, thank you, thank you whomever you are!! Of all the prompts I posted I never thought anyone would pick the Tiffany lyrics one. You have no idea how happy this makes me!! This story was beautiful! It made me ache for both of them...the way you illustrated how delicate & fragile their relationship was after the shooting & how much they both wanted but were afraid to take that step. *le sigh* I loved it & I will always believe this is how it really happened!

mondeo July 22 2007, 11:05:03 UTC

Yay, I'm so glad you liked it! I actually didn't originally plan to use the lyrics, but the story kind of took a different direction from what I originally planned and I found the lyrics worked pretty well with it. I wish it had happened this way *glares at Elena*

veronicaluv July 4 2007, 22:41:19 UTC

Beautiful! Covers all the angst and yet lets them come to each other so naturally. Lovely *g*.

mondeo July 22 2007, 11:05:30 UTC

Thanks, glad you liked =)