All Ran Away and Hid, for flipflopadd1ct

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Title: All Ran Away and Hid
Author: smilla02
Recipient: flipflopadd1ct
Rating: NC-17
Author's Notes: Based loosely on flipflopadd1ct's prompts: Martin surprises Danny with his sexual knowledge and something about jerking off.
Summary: Danny looks at Martin. Established relationship.

Comments

[le_mot_mo]

[smilla02]

Thank you sweetheart for the nice feedback!

[redfairie19]

Oh. Just oh.

It's an old argument: sometimes Danny forgets how different they are. Coming at things from opposite paths and not quite meeting in the middle. Sometimes not meeting at all.

In two lines, you manage to summarize all of the reasons I love Danny and Martin. It's that tension, that place where they both exist except they don't. It's there bridge to cross together. *sigh* Simply amazing.

[smilla02]

I'm so happy this worked for you so well, it came to me while writing Martin and Danny after a long time, that there's always tension between them, that beyond the obvious actraction the road to meet each other is a long one.
Thank you for the nice comment :)

[clockstopper]

I'm not sure a review from me will do this story justice. I want to say something clever and insightful, but the most I can come up with is that this fic is just... magical in a sense. Carefully woven together and scattered just the way I like it. One where you've got to read and re-read and carefully absorb it before you can fully udnerstand it and then you just want to read over again because it's so beautifully told. It captures the boys so well in their struggles. I like that you put that they're different, because they are, but that it makes them more real as a couple.

Simply amazing.

[smilla02]

Believe me this review made me so very happy. You said so many nice things about this story, thank you!

I like that you put that they're different, because they are, but that it makes them more real as a couple.

Yes *nods* it is something that I sometimes forget how different they are, for upbringing, yes, but for temperament and everything else.

[farad]

Beautiful. I love the contrasts of their temperaments - and the dichotomies within their own personalities so nicely laid out. Very well done. Strong style too, clean yet very visual.

[smilla02]

Thank you very much for the nice comment, I'm so happy I was able to sell the idea I was trying to sell!

[tigriswolf]

Oh, the prose here is lovely!

[smilla02]

*beams* Thank you!