Wonderful story. The characterizations are spot-on. I love how you have Elana excuse her change of mind by apologizing for being so inconsistent...So Elena Delgado, LOL. You have the Danny/Martin relationship portrayed so sweetly: I love it!
Thank you thank you! I love Danny and Martin - Martin especially. He's such a perfect little wounded warrior. I love Danny taking care of him as well - the shopping scene was the one that I had in my head as a longer scene because I love the idea of Viv seeing more of the two of them together adn seeing Danny really taking care of Martin 'cause someone needs to!
You're right, that shopping scene was mesmerizing. You absolutely have to write more so I can read something more of your's everyday. Demanding? Yes. :D
Thank you - wish I could have the time to do that!!! I"m actually writing a lot in M7 fandom as well . . .. love some EC in almost every role he's been in!
Speaking of which - *excellent* icon! What's that from?
Thank you thank you - I really enjoyed writing this story - it was fun to get into the heads of the others - especially Jack! And it only made sense to me that Elena would just assume that it wasn't true because, really, who would say no to her?
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Speaking of which - *excellent* icon! What's that from?
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Thanks for reading and commenting!
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lets do that again?
PLease! lETS MAKE ANOTHER EXCHANGE, IT WAS SO FUN!
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