Intimacies, for le_mot_mo

Jul 22, 2007 18:35

Title: Intimacies
Author: Edward G. Hoover
Recipient: le_mot_moRating:Well - no sex, even though someone thinks about it . . . R ( Read more... )

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soblonde1202 July 23 2007, 00:05:32 UTC
Wonderful story. The characterizations are spot-on. I love how you have Elana excuse her change of mind by apologizing for being so inconsistent...So Elena Delgado, LOL. You have the Danny/Martin relationship portrayed so sweetly: I love it!

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farad July 30 2007, 14:03:45 UTC
Thank you thank you! I love Danny and Martin - Martin especially. He's such a perfect little wounded warrior. I love Danny taking care of him as well - the shopping scene was the one that I had in my head as a longer scene because I love the idea of Viv seeing more of the two of them together adn seeing Danny really taking care of Martin 'cause someone needs to!

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soblonde1202 July 31 2007, 00:00:54 UTC
You're right, that shopping scene was mesmerizing. You absolutely have to write more so I can read something more of your's everyday. Demanding? Yes. :D

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farad July 31 2007, 13:49:05 UTC
Thank you - wish I could have the time to do that!!! I"m actually writing a lot in M7 fandom as well . . .. love some EC in almost every role he's been in!

Speaking of which - *excellent* icon! What's that from?

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leopardchic79 July 23 2007, 02:36:00 UTC
Oh this was perfect. I love fics where the others find out about them & you did it so wonderful...very subtle-like. Great story!

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farad July 30 2007, 13:56:30 UTC
Thank you thank you - I really enjoyed writing this story - it was fun to get into the heads of the others - especially Jack! And it only made sense to me that Elena would just assume that it wasn't true because, really, who would say no to her?

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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annievh August 19 2007, 23:46:40 UTC
hey, people!
lets do that again?
PLease! lETS MAKE ANOTHER EXCHANGE, IT WAS SO FUN!

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oximore May 16 2009, 18:58:15 UTC
Wondeful story! *g*

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