The Future That Waits (PG-13) for suprockstar

[dmexchangemods]

Title: The Future That Waits
Author:
Pairing: Draco/Hermione
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: A few curse words here and there. Compliant with all books.
Summary: Your life is defined by its opportunities... even the ones you miss.
Notes:I want to thank my betas: catalinay, cindas, and becauseshecan. They seriously helped me more than words can say. Any mistakes in here are my

Comments

[inspired_ideas]

Oh, how sad. I see it happening that way, though. This was excellent and I enjoyed the way you mirrored the beginning at the end.

[inspired_ideas]

Thank you!

[suprockstar]

THIS THIS THIS. HOW I WOULD LOVE THIS TO BE CANON.

Omfg mystery author, I think I love you, because I AM IN LOOOOOOOOOVE WITH THIS. gklfdkg;ldfkgl;d you couldn't made my request more perfect. Seriously. I love your dialogue, especially in '5'. OH OH OH and I loved how at the end, you used two of the same paragraphs that you used at the beginning, looved how its joined everything together.

With a heavy heart, he realizes that he's finally got his answers.

love love love this. I love how you're telling us that he is in love with Hermione, without him having to right out and think it, to tell us. BB I NEED TO KNOW WHO YOU ARE, CUZ IM FEELING SO MUCH LOVE FOR THIS AND YOUR WRITING RIGHT NOW. gldgldkgl;dkgl;dkl;dfkg;lkg;ldklgldf

EVERYTHING BB. LOVED EVERYTHING. :)

[suprockstar]

I hope you enjoyed it, bb! I'm not even going to lie. I was super nervous writing this story and then having to submit it. I wrote one story within 2 weeks, hated it and changed my mind last minute and rewrote this one in 4 hours. I know it shows, but I felt a little better about this one. I am a HUGE fan of your stories and writing and it was like, "Sure, no pressure whatsoever!" lol.

I can breathe now. Yay.

Glad you enjoyed it! :)

[suprockstar]

soooo I think you should send me the original one, you know, just for fun, haha so I can flail and freak out more about your brilliant writing because I know I'll love it. :) but after the big reveal of course. :P

uh, you're a fan of ME? hahha now I really need to know who you are, because your writing triumphs over mine, most definitely. :P

[ldymusyc]

Awww. Poor sad none-together ending. Not what I like, but when you're aiming for angst, that tends to be how everyone goes. Good work for as fast as you said you did it. :)

[ldymusyc]

Thank you. Definitely not on par with a lot of the Dramione writers out there, but I'm happy it worked out! :)

[junewilliams7]

OMG, you have no need to apologize for lack of angst -- this is full of angst! It could even be called a tragedy because Draco's decision has led to this path of no return, a path in which he and Astoria and Hermione (and possibly Ron) all have less than satisfactory lives with no solution. Well written, you!

[junewilliams7]

Aw, thank you! I generally love happy stories or at least angsty stories with happy endings, but I also have a love for pure heart wrenching angst. To have to live with the fact that you are in love with someone else (someone who you can't have for one reason or another) is truly heartbreaking.

Thank you again! :)

[dollfaced]

You broke my heart! But in a really good way. Very nicely done :)

[dollfaced]

Thank you! ♥