Cruisin' Through Love [PG] for czarmar (1/3)

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Title: Cruisin’ Through Love
Author: widthsandcurves
Rating: PG
Recipient: czarmar
Disclaimer: JK Rowling's characters do not belong to me.
Warnings: This fic is a victim of scope creep.
Author Notes: To czarmar, let me just say that your prompt was a huge challenge for me, for reasons that I will not go into. The premise may seem a bit out of the blue and I apologize for

Comments

[rafiki_tiki]

Normally I really dislike stories that involve any aspect of the epilogue (especially the kids, who are physical confirmation of the Epilogue that Sank 1000 Dramione Ships) but this story is fantastic! It's a smooth witty read, the banter between the kids is adorable without being too precious, and your characterisations are spot on. bravo!

[rzzmg]

What a fun premise! I've never read a fic like this, and am eager to see where you take us, mystery author!

Loved that you made Rose a Slytherin and Scor a Hufflepuff (*snarf snarf*). That's just brilliant!

Clean revision here. Nice.

Next chappy...

[mrs_helenesnape]

It's sometimes quite difficult to include the canon offspring in a clearly AU fic. You have done so remarkably well and the tweaks you've made (the switching of the Houses and so forth) make for a very amusing read. I can't wait to see how this will all play out.

*rushing onward*

[drcjsnider]

oh... i love the matching making of Rose/Scorpius. My favorite line: “It’s on page three of the Slytherin Handbook. When all else fails, the three B’s prevail: bribery, bullying, and blackmail.” She recited reverently.

I bet there really is a slytherin handbook :)

[pokeystar]

~glowers~

You know that handbook is supposed to a secret, right?

Don't forget the three S's.