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Saving Your Enemy [PG-13] for MiHnn (2/2)

May 10, 2011 20:37

Title: Saving Your Enemy
Author: luciannamalfoy
Rating: PG-13/light M
Recipient: Mihnn
Disclaimer: I don't own the HP universe.
Warning(s): Some angst, some fluff....
Author/Artist Note(s): I hope my recipient will like this fic! Draco and Hermione didn't want to go on with the smut in this for me...
Summary: Who would've thought that a letter could change one's ( Read more... )

Comments 14

mccargi May 11 2011, 01:15:48 UTC

What an interesting premise for bringing them together and a very sweet story.

artsyjeans May 11 2011, 01:30:36 UTC

Very interesting and original concept. It's was a very sweet story.

strawberry_kait May 11 2011, 03:49:12 UTC

This was flufferific! I liked the story concept and how you took a real-life disease/ trauma and managed to incorporate the blood purity theme from HP. The story has several SpAG issues and would benefit from having someone beta it for you, but definitely worth it. Loved the quirky insults!

rzzmg May 11 2011, 08:26:50 UTC

She was going to be his wife, she just didn't know it yet.
"Luci is OLD."
"I am going to perma-shrink your family jewels so that you can’t do this to me again!"

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!

A few spelling errors in this chapter as well. I'd recommend a beta run-through to correct.

Other than that, a nice, fluffy, fun story! Thank you for sharing. :)

margaritaabate May 11 2011, 13:40:27 UTC

this was like a comedy of madness and more ridiculous than the previous chapter.....effing hilarious. really nicely done mystery author...great job just being completely OCC but making us LOVE the crazy world you've invited us into.

one of my fave lines: Draco hummed a happy tune as he rested in his bed. His witch was interested in him!