Partners in Crime [PG-13] for Our Pinch Hitters

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The original recipient of this gift is no longer participating, but the author has kindly offered to dedicate their story to everyone who has pinch hit for us this round as a special thank you for their efforts.

Title: Partners in Crime
Author: pips_n_chiaw
Rating: PG-13
Recipient: Our Pinch Hitters
Disclaimer: Harry Potter and all other characters, etc. are

Comments

[borax38]

I loved this fic! As the other reviewers said, the action and banter between the two was very enjoyable.

What I especially appreciated was how you integrated the Muggle elements in the story. It's always tricky, because it's never really clear in the books how much the wizards understand of the Muggle world (ie, the Ministry has cars, but they Arthur Weasley can't pronounce electricity right). I thought the anecdote about Draco asking Hermione for her electron microscope was quite cute.

[mexicantt]

Aww, adorable! I liked how silly this was at times, and how they were able to get closer while working together. I like the idea that he was made to understand muggles more by working with their enchanted inventions. So clever and fun. ^_^ I also like Harry's rather lame attempt at sabotage and Hermione's solution for it.

I think my favorite bit is the idea of Sonic Hedgehog shoes. All of the muggle artifacts were awesome though, and a squib using youtube and having a video go viral was just awesome. That's totally a first for me in a fic. Loved it!

[sukiss]

That was so sweet!!! Slow but totally in a good way, because you really wanted to linger with them & the crazy things that kept trying to kill Hermione.

[dormiensa]

fabulous! a funny action fic with the most important ingredient: great banter. hilarious that arthur is draco's boss and that he and hermione have been paired up -- but hey, they're the best!

[lucillajoanna]

Have I commented about your scary ideas about misusing magic while editing? Well, here I go. You two better not be given wands. :D While reading this, I kept imagining them on tv. Change the format and this will read like an engrossing screenplay. Well, all right, engrossing for me because it's Draco and Hermione who's starring, but you know what I mean.