Comments | dmitup: Can't fight an Eclipse.

dmitup

Can't fight an Eclipse.

Aug 09, 2007 17:22

Review of Eclipse

At first I decided that I would have lots quotes, but frankly I don't have time for that at the moment.
( Long,loooong entry, I don't think i've ever been that invested in writing a review of fandom before! )

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brasaremean August 10 2007, 00:02:42 UTC

Like I was saying, if you want to claim Edward and you have an Eclipsing love, then please, just show it. You can't have an entire book that goes : jacobjacobjacobjacobjacobjacobjacobjacobedwardjacobjacobjacobjacob
jacobjacobjacobjacobedwardjacobjacobjacobjacobjacob
jacobjacobjacobedward and then expect us to believe that.

wowowowowowowword. HELL. words!

The book should have been more balanced, because if she chose Edward at the end she could have shown why, not just say he's the one you can't live without and leave it at that.

maybe she's saving it for BD.

+Jacob/Bella ( ... )

dmitup August 11 2007, 18:36:48 UTC

Oh man, I REALLY HOPE SHE IS SAVING IT FOR BD?! What are the chances of it happening? Probably 49% out of 100 but heh,i'm desperate. =/

Please,do tell me! Why do you see Edward as the sun ?

brasaremean August 11 2007, 18:40:50 UTC

lol i totally explained that in that post of mine

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dmitup August 11 2007, 18:50:14 UTC

omfg, shame on me, I remember that now! I think i remember someone else replying saying that if you changed Jacob's and Edward's representation, you had it right. wtf. really.

OH AND, YOU ARE CLEARLY FTW:

"and of course I know moon and sun and earth aren't the same size. but just so I don't look biased i've made them all the same size" WIN!

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brasaremean August 10 2007, 00:03:08 UTC

UHM,JACOB/LEAH. I KIND OF LIKE THAT.

i kind of LOVE that, i already said it. i'm thinking he might even imprint on her, they might imprint on each other. because he said, you have to really look at someone, to see someone to imprint on them, and he's not seeing her because he only sees bella and she's not seeing him because she only sees sam. but with time, they might become friends, really close friends, and then even more and well. it might happen. i can see it happening.

My heart breaks for Edward, you know why? He told her that he was waiting all of these years for her, and of that there is no doubt about that, I mean why else would he still be with Bella after all of the Jacob-fest. He has never had eyes for someone else and yet he has to be Bella's blanket while she cries over another man she loves(...). I mean, why does Bella keep going and going about Jacob's pain when Edward is clearly suffering too? Isn't he the love of her existence?BUT JACOB'S IN PAIN. SERIOUS PAAAAIN. PAAAAAAAAAAIN. that scene killed me :(. i felt so ( ... )

dmitup August 11 2007, 18:19:13 UTC

Ugh, that reminds me how Jacob would look into Bella's eyes for a long time hoping that he would imprint her,wtf. I can see Jacob/Leah happening too, they are both not thinking clearly right now, I think that the main reason for the whole Jacob/Leah both being hurt storyline it's for them to actually see that they are both worthy ( ... )

brasaremean August 10 2007, 00:03:28 UTC

Now, I strongly believe that Bella needs to realize the damage she has done. Not just 3 or 4 lines on how she feels like a horrible person, and let everything be fine and dandy in 'Breaking Dawn'. I want to see what Edward went through this whole thing, my dream chapter for ' Breaking Dawn' is Emmett talking to Bella telling her to stop hurting Edward so much,ugh... anyone of the family would do but especially Jasper,Esme or Emmett.

i'd actually love alice to be the one to do it. because she's always so friendly and always so nice to bella and stuff, and it would be so convenient for her to defend her brother knowing bella cares about her opinion the most. of course it would be actually FUN watching emmett do this :D.

Oh,whoa... I almost forgot about adding this, the one thing that annoyed me the most from the book was that Bella did listen through their conversation in the tent and she still went ahead with everything that she did and I don't recall her ever apologizing. Just because Edward is more mature doesn't mean he can take ( ... )

brasaremean August 10 2007, 00:03:47 UTC

ALSO, SORRY FOR SPAMMING.

dmitup August 11 2007, 17:58:21 UTC

PFFT, YOU ARE MADE OF AWESOME! I LOVE DISCUSSING WITH YOU, SO NO NEED FOR APOLOGIES!

dmitup August 11 2007, 17:57:22 UTC

Alice,hmmm, yeah. That would be great. Somehow I was a bit thrown off by Alice in the book, see I used to read fics when I was bored and somehow she was turned into the same cartoon character that i've read in fics and that pissed me off greatly, there was just no difference. But that's beside's the point, I'd love if she would tell Bella exactly what Edward is going through. Plus like you said she takes Alice opinion in consideration the most ( ... )

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usedtobending August 10 2007, 01:22:00 UTC

You know I love you for this and know exactly what you're feeling *hugs*

chloerzzz August 10 2007, 07:03:11 UTC

Wow. great review. It made me want to review. I was going to, but now I want to do it...like now. haha. I was gonna go work on my story, but now I thnk I'm gonna review ( ... )