LJI WK2

[dmousey]

The child's curious green eyes, were alight with the need to know. She hung back from the other rowdy children, following the man's hands with her luminous eyes, as he flipped shiny coins back and forth through his fingers. Once he had all of their attention -- he tossed a handful of coins into the air

Comments

[adoptedwriter]

I love this! I hope there's another chapter coming someday!

[dmousey]

Thank you! You probably will. 😏
🌻✌🐁🎃

[beeker121]

I like the way the man with the coins came back at the end, that was unexpected in a lovely way.

[dmousey]

Thank you! That was always to be the resolution, if I had more time (and my hands co-operated), it would have transitioned smoother. The fact I was able to push and get this done amazed me! I appreciate your popping in and being kind. 🎃✌🐁🔥

[kittenboo]

I really like the flow of this, well done.

[dmousey]

Thank you!! 🎃✌🐁🔥

[sweeny_todd]

wow! I am glad the uncle will rescue her! I didn't see that coming and damn I am glad it did!

[dmousey]

Thank you! I have some things in store for the little one! (Like her naming day) depends on Gary how much is told. 🎃🔥✌🐁🌻

[tonithegreat]

Ooooh, a hopeful ending for her! Looking forward to more!

[dmousey]

Thank you Toni! 🌻✌🐁🔥🎃