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omgwutsayu in dn_sues

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Feb 11, 2009 19:39

Or Series Title: A world without a genius is so boring ! Near
Fandom: Death Note
Culprit Author's Name: star-struck-imagination

Full Name (plus titles if any): Rinnu Nagasaki (Though having been at Wammy's House, she has no codename.)
Full Species(es): you!Sue (I thought it was a rule they weren't allowed names?)
Hair Color (include adjectives): " ( Read more... )

'horny' near, ofc, self-inserts, what do you mean wammy's is an orphanage, mello the latest fashion acccessory, goes against near's better judgment, does-not-belong!

Comments 4

anonymous February 14 2009, 23:57:24 UTC

"...when you tried to tell Near about your theory." -"Tried" being the operative word here, I guess, since I doubt that Near understood anything of Sue's tedious, grammatarded monologue.

And is it just me, or is it a bit strange that Sue's family had "tears of regret" in their eyes when they killed themselves in front of the sue? If I remember correctly, people under the influence of the death note usually go into some sort of trance-like state, like zombies...so they shouldn't be able to feel regret, or any kind of emotion, as they die. Then again, I could be wrong.

~fish

StarStruckImagination anonymous January 24 2010, 14:33:36 UTC

What the fuck was ur problem anyway. I don't care what unbelievable grammatical errors i have made, i don't care how horrible my story is, but, if i know my manners well enough, i would say that u first ask the fucking author what the heck he or she did there and then post something like this on a average site, with the comment like ( ... )

Re: StarStruckImagination anonymous June 14 2010, 23:54:49 UTC

1st: Learn english. Or type it in your language.
2nd, Why do we read these? We don't hate them, we find them REALLY FUNNY.
3rd: "I don't care what u wrote about me in this stupid article" ... |: You obviously care enough about this to write a bigass tl;dr butthurt comment about your awful fic.
4th: Posting bad stories/characters all over the internet is a great way to show beginning writers how NOT to write.
So thank you for your stories for both educational and...especially entertainment purposes. CB
~ ;D G'day.
PS: Stories like yours also helps the self-esteem of bad writers. Reading fanfics like yours makes their stories all-the-more awesome, and them feel much better about themselves.

Re: StarStruckImagination anonymous June 15 2010, 00:32:32 UTC

AHAHAHAHAHAHA