[STORY] Before Snow

[dns07]

“It is not nor it cannot come to good,
But break, my heart, for I must hold my tongue.”
- Hamlet, William Shakespeare
The maple trees have turned to red. It decorates alongside the roads

Comments

[erhyme]

poetic as usual :) pretty. am kind of curious of whose point of view is this, hehe.

just.. at the ending, I think you forget to add 'if' in front of I.. it was 'If I were the balloon', wasn't it?

despite of that, well written. thank you for this and will be waiting for your next poetic stories, kekeke

[dns07]

its the pov of teh girls who left the guy @ falling snow
n ...
it WAS there, i guess -_-
at least till i edited the formatting -..-

ty anw~