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A New Poem - Crit welcome

Sep 04, 2010 01:09

With team APS and the preparation for NPS and my slam tour and new job, I ( Read more... )

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zsteady September 9 2010, 03:31:55 UTC
hey danny! congrats on the new job! where are you working now?

love the new poem... i remember thinking as a kid that life as a source of energy was a weird thing, because pretty much everything inanimate has to be "plugged in" to something to move and work, but we are essentially "wireless," mysteriously fueled by some other energy source.

only suggestion would be to change the line "If it weren't for life," to just "Without life," to be less wordy?

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