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do_not_confess

HP fic: Safe House

Jan 16, 2008 17:19

Title: Safe House
Pairing: Ron/Hermione
Rating: T
Summary: Missing moment from Deathly Hallows. Heart to Heart after Malfoy Manor.

( How strange, she thought. How strange one’s own cries sounded when you were nothing but a distant onlooker from the sidelines. )

fic, pairing: ron/hermione, fic: harry potter

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do_not_confess January 17 2008, 17:31:44 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

emiliamarie January 17 2008, 17:52:40 UTC

I love "his overwhelming Ron-ness" it completely makes my life!

do_not_confess January 17 2008, 18:44:24 UTC

Lol. It is quite overwhelming - I'm a huge Ron fan really and it's the whole package that makes him so adorable.

Thank you for your lovely comment. Glad to make your life any day!

starfishe January 17 2008, 17:57:08 UTC

That was beautiful, great job!

do_not_confess January 17 2008, 18:56:24 UTC

Thanks!

crystallinevine January 17 2008, 18:31:53 UTC

Great one, lovely insight!

do_not_confess January 17 2008, 18:45:58 UTC

Thank you! Those two are a pain to write for me cause whenever I want it to be funny and light and full of banter they just won't cooperate and it comes out all schmoopy. Glad it worked for you as a moment.

abusing_sarcasm January 17 2008, 18:34:40 UTC

Simply beautiful... That was so wonderfully *real*. Amazing job!

do_not_confess January 17 2008, 18:48:00 UTC

Thank you so much!

Good to know it felt real to you. That's what missing moments should be all about (IMHO) and to achieve a certain level of authenticity with characters and situation is what I try to do in all my writing.