Hawaii Five-0 Fic - 'The Weight of Us'

Apr 29, 2011 20:54

Author/Artist: doc_3 
Title: The Weight of Us
Rating: R, mainly for language, M/M kissing
Warnings/Spoilers:  Spoilers - general for any aired episodes, although slight.
Summary:   Danny looks back at a decision he and Steve made years ago, and has an important conversation with a teenaged Grace.  Future fic. Danny/Steve
Author's note:  This was a ( Read more... )

fan fiction, steve/danny, hawaii 5-0

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alamo_girl80 April 30 2011, 02:49:00 UTC
Holy shit. This is achingly beautiful. And I especially love that you had them *not* get together, because anything worth getting is worth working for, and it is so realistic that Danny might back off instead of plunge in.

But the ending is so sweet and poignant. And Steve needing to be shown that he deserves this. Oh, my heart!

fabulous job!

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doc_3 April 30 2011, 02:52:35 UTC
'Achingly beautiful' is the best compliment in my book :) I wanted it to hurt a little bit, but had to have that happy ending. (And your icon makes my heart hurt a little - in a good way)

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wintermute_lj April 30 2011, 02:50:38 UTC
this is a beautiful piece of writing. thank you for sharing with us :)

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doc_3 April 30 2011, 02:53:12 UTC
I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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whittyrabbit April 30 2011, 03:12:18 UTC
Honestly, I cried every single time when I watched that movie, which is....about 5-7 times already. OMG, finally there is the happy ending. I don't want to cry again to see two broken hearts. Love you so much!

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doc_3 April 30 2011, 03:26:57 UTC
Yeah, had to give our boys a happy ending (beginning).

Thanks!

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Re: That song! doc_3 April 30 2011, 03:28:47 UTC
The song (and the use of it as a title) - totally iam_space's idea - I can take no credit!

Good idea on mentioning the song in the notes - it's a great one.

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doc_3 April 30 2011, 03:43:43 UTC
Thanks :)

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