Lost in Transition (2 of 2)

Mar 25, 2010 19:28

Title: Lost in Transition
Authors: qthelights and kadiel_krieger
Pairings: Jeff/Jensen/Misha/Christian
[JDM/MC], [JA/MC], [JA/JDM], [CK/MC], [CK/JA/MC], vague [CK/JA]
Rating: Adult
Wordcount: 18k
Disclaimer: Yeah. Not even remotely real.
Warnings: Angst and porn. Lots of both.
Summary: Jensen finds something he didn't even know he was looking for.
A/N: Thank you cupiscent for ( Read more... )

pair:jensen/jeff, spn, pair:jensen/kane, fic:rps, pair:jensen/misha, pair:misha/jeff, pair:misha/kane, pair:jensen/misha/kane

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kaylbunny March 26 2010, 22:41:58 UTC
Oh oh most of this made me feel so sad (and seriously, what's up with you two making me alternately want to fap and cry?) Sir being a Bad Man kind of threw me for a loop and Chris' anger towards Misha for going off with him made me all achey, but the real pain came when Misha was watching Jensen with Chris. I swear I thought I was going to cry. But the ending made me smile so I forgive all :D

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kriari March 26 2010, 22:59:35 UTC
I'm so sorry, bb! (we are the evil godmothers of Sad!Porn?) Sir was not necessarily a bad man. He's just not what Jensen needs, could never have been. *cuddles you forever* It was really an express lane to teaching those two doofuses that there was more between them than hot smexings.

Hopefully you enjoyed the ride even if it was achy?

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kaylbunny March 26 2010, 23:07:30 UTC
*snuggles* I did enjoy it, though i'm going to have to stroke my cat for like an hour to get over the angst ;)

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kriari March 26 2010, 23:12:14 UTC
Maybe we should make up a new genre. Porngst? or Angorn? HRM. I am meeeen.

My brain just went a dirty place.

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madelf March 27 2010, 00:19:58 UTC
I'm kind of stuck in OMG Flail-y mode, because that was amazing. There's such a byzantine tangle of all the relationships between the characters that I think I could read it over and over and still find something interesting. And all the little nuances of in each character's relationship with each other - seriously, awesome.

And of course - hot. Can't forget hot. *flail*

Edited for Redundancy Department of Redundancy.

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kriari March 27 2010, 00:26:53 UTC
Now I'm stuck in OMG Flail-y mode! I'm so glad you liked it. I mean yes, porn is awesome, but my personal porn is totally the exploration of the complexities and differences in the way people relate to one another. XD

I'm so, so glad you enjoyed it, m'dear.

Hee!

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qthelights March 27 2010, 00:32:47 UTC
Thank you!!! We really really enjoyed creating those little nuances. It was a lot of fun. Although very tangled as you note. Sometimes it tangled us too and we had to spend time unraveling!

Also, I love that the porn worked for you too *g*

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moonlettuce March 27 2010, 01:35:13 UTC
This is 18,000 words of awesome! *\o/* Yes, with the hot, but more omg! with the gorgeous undertones running through each relationship :D

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kriari March 27 2010, 02:06:17 UTC
Men are complicated little creatures, indeed :D Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it!

Yay polyfic!

*licks your CK icon*

If nothing else, this fic has given me an appreciation for him :)

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qthelights March 27 2010, 02:20:15 UTC
Hee, thank you, hon! I'm so glad that the character relationships were complex and had undertones, because they really felt like they needed to be to make it believable.

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zelda_zee March 27 2010, 06:57:52 UTC
What a fantastic fic! I enjoyed it so much! The characterization was excellent - your POVs were so clear and real. I loved the complicated history between the characters, all the little nuances and secrets that played out in that room. It was like everything they did had a surface meaning and then a deeper one beneath it, and you managed that while keeping the sex on track and smoking hot and sticking with mostly unstated feelings. It's a great fic, best thing I've read in quite a while.

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qthelights March 27 2010, 07:41:32 UTC
Thank you so much!! It was funny actually, every time we came to write another pov (and we did that because we just couldn't choose only one) we liked it more than the last. These boys are just so much fun to get inside of. Each one is so different, and so wonderfully messed up for different reasons. It is great to hear that we pulled off those characterisations.

(as a side note? your jensen/misha fic was one of the very first ones i read of the pairing and i adore it, so feedback from you makes me all asquee and fan!girly *g*)

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zelda_zee April 2 2010, 07:57:59 UTC
Just wanted to say thanks for the kind words about my fic. :)

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kriari March 27 2010, 13:23:39 UTC
Thank you so, so much!

We enjoyed writing this so much, so we're both ecstatic that other people seem to be enjoying it too. I may well have fell a little bit in love with this Chris through the penning of it. I'm so glad that you enjoyed the twisted bits of their past and how they informed the present! Those parts are always my favorite.

Thank you again!

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embroiderama March 27 2010, 16:22:21 UTC
HOMG! What a combination you have here, and what an *explosive* amount of hot mixed in with conflicting emotions and personalities and substances--damn. Great story!

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kriari March 27 2010, 21:07:30 UTC
Thanks so much! We can only take credit for a small portion of the hot. The boys do a lot of that on their own. :)

Thank you!

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qthelights March 27 2010, 22:40:18 UTC
Thank you!! So glad that you liked it! The conflicting emotions and personalities were just so much fun to write. It is awesome that they were fun to read for other people too :)

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