White Collar Fic - Second Chances

[doctor_fangeek]

Title: Second Chances
Author: doctor_fangeek
Rating: G
Characters/Pairings: Neal, Peter
Word Count:1330
Warnings: None
Summary: Filling the gap between when Peter turns down Neal's work-release idea & when he arrives at the prison to pick him up.
Authors Note: My runthecon Round Two contribution, for the prompt "low batteries" from vexed_wench. The comm is a flash writing challenge

Comments

[sheenianni]

Awwww, that is amazing. Peter. Neal. All those feelings.
Psyche and the body are very connected, so I can easily see Neal getting sick after his escape and his first meeting with Peter.
It's aching and cautionsly happy and very hopeful. *melts* Wonderful fic.

[doctor_fangeek]

Thanks so much for the wonderful feedback. "Aching and cautiously happy" - I like that. :) Glad you enjoyed.

[aragarna]

Nice tag to the Pilot! :)
And great job on finishing on time! :)

ETA: forgot to say that the reference to the Energizer rabbit cracked me up. LOL Love your interpretation of the prompt!

[doctor_fangeek]

Yay! I'm really glad you liked the Energizer bunny reference. Thanks for the kind comment.

[sinfulslasher]

We definitely need to make you write with a deadline looming over your head more often if that's the result!

Great missing scene from the Pilot, and I can totally see the whole thing happening.

Well done!

[doctor_fangeek]

::grin:: Thanks. "I can totally see the whole thing happening" is some of the best feedback there is. I don't know that a looming deadline will always give good results, though - I was fortunate that an idea struck in the morning and I had a few odd moments to flesh it out in my head.

Glad you liked it and thanks for the feedback.

[sapphire2309]

This is adorable :3

[doctor_fangeek]

Thanks!

[nywcgirl]

Good job finishing it in time and such a lovely story.

[doctor_fangeek]

Thanks for taking the time to comment. Glad you liked the story. :)