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Harry Potter Fic: Thanks for the Memories (1/4)

Jun 23, 2012 21:01

Title: Thanks for the Memories (1.4)
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Hermione/Pansy, Hermione/Romilda
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2.459
Summary: Hermione's life gets complicated when a woman from the not so distant past comes back into her life.
Disclaimer: Harry Potter does not belong to me, that's all J.K. What you see here is simply derivative, non- ( Read more... )

fandom: harry potter, fic: thanks for the memories, p: hermione/romilda, p: hermione/pansy

Comments 6

mrswoman June 23 2012, 18:39:29 UTC

Oh, I'm so looking forward to seeing where you take the Pansy/Hermione dynamic. Thank you for writing this, I miss these two :)

doctor_java June 24 2012, 00:08:37 UTC

Thank you! I like these two, as well. I will try to do them justice.

snegurochka_lee June 23 2012, 20:03:34 UTC

Aaahhh, great set-up! I really like how we get a sense of Hermione's professional obligations and personal-life wistfulness, as well as Romilda's seductive ways. And even though I wish I could read the rest of the story now, you've timed the cliffhanger perfectly! Can't wait to meet Pansy and see what this past is with Hermione.

And triple points to you for creating (so far!) a female-character 'verse, with even Hermione's boss a woman. Love it!

doctor_java June 24 2012, 00:19:33 UTC

Glad you like the story so far! I'm usually one for one-shots, but this story got too ungainly for one post. Some men will be popping up in the next chapter, but no females will be neglected. :)

amaranta316 August 6 2012, 16:14:53 UTC

Really impressive start :)... I have fallen in love with your style xD... I mean, sometimes when you want to read something it is quite difficult to read it all if it is badly written. This is definitely not the case: your writing is exquisite!

Sooooo I'm guessing Pansy and Hermione had some kind of relationship in the past?

Can't wait to read the next chapter!!!

doctor_java August 6 2012, 23:33:37 UTC

I'm glad you like the story so far - and I will try never to leave a chapter so riddled with errors that it's unreadable! Your guess about Pansy and Hermione's past may or may not be correct, you'll find out in the next chapter! Which I am currently in the process of tweaking. It's been difficult to wrestle into submission, but I think it's getting there.

Thank you so much for leaving a review! I appreciate it.