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Of Pills and Puzzles pt. 3

Jul 18, 2008 09:00

Title: Of Pills and Puzzles pt. 3
Author: Dodo Chaplet
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Rating: R

Part 1 ~ Part 2

I'm utter crap when it comes to summaries. Uh, let's see, there's more sharing, then there's a soupçon of dirty-talk, topped off with a liberal portion of hot, sweaty man love.

A/N: Some of you have commented on how Ianto's depression rings true. Well, ( Read more... )

Comments 27

goddessmaat July 18 2008, 14:36:28 UTC

That's a great chapter and a different tone :)

dodochaplet July 18 2008, 14:38:00 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you like it. Being sad all the time is tough, I had to lighten it up.

morgia July 18 2008, 15:10:20 UTC

Hééé! Its very good, wow!

alba17 July 18 2008, 15:32:15 UTC

That was great, I loved it. I've been reading all these and enjoying them, I don't know if I commented previously.

Loved this...
"But it took so much effort, keeping up that level of misery. Maintaining such a strict level of grief. Eventually it becomes work, and Ianto was so tired." I can identify.

I really like the tone of their dialogue and how Ianto has the sudden realization that he can do anything with Jack and then feels liberated. It's all very sexy and feels real.

dodochaplet July 18 2008, 15:35:56 UTC

Aw, thank you. I'm glad it doesn't just sound like Ianto's being all sulky and bitchy.

alba17 July 18 2008, 15:43:35 UTC

He does sound a wee bit sulky, but it's kind of cute. I kind of like bitchy!Ianto.

dodochaplet July 18 2008, 15:45:18 UTC

Yeah, you're right, he is sulking. But he does it so well.

flowright July 18 2008, 15:45:39 UTC

Nice chapter.

How many parts will you write about that verse ?

dodochaplet July 18 2008, 15:48:49 UTC

Good question, I don't know. I don't want it to degenerate into a series of stories about Ianto sulking and being depressed.

flowright July 18 2008, 16:06:39 UTC

Sure, but I love the way you write Ianto and Jack interaction so you can keep writing that verse (and makes Ianto a bit less depressed *__*) or you can write other fics if you want.

It's an interesting take on Ianto (that foul mouth of his XD)

dodochaplet July 18 2008, 16:09:40 UTC

Guh, the foul mouth.

I will definitely keep writing fics. Thanks for reading them.

crayon_harkness July 18 2008, 16:37:27 UTC

Ooooh I love it!
Just have to admit though that your icon freaks me out ... just a tad (honest!)

dodochaplet July 18 2008, 16:38:44 UTC

It's ok. If it gets to scary, you can always put my icon in the freezer.

And thanks!