Thanks for taking the time out to write this! Especially the parts regarding Draco's character and overemphasising his abilities. Once I'm used to a character, I often get lazy with my writing (this isn't the first time this has happened ;A;) so it's really helpful that you've pulled me up on this.
Regarding his relationship with Claire, I thought I had been taking enough time to develop things, but it seems I've been too impatient.
Thanks again, and I'll do my best to take this on board.
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Regarding his relationship with Claire, I thought I had been taking enough time to develop things, but it seems I've been too impatient.
Thanks again, and I'll do my best to take this on board.
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