Smile (R)

[doggie_dreams]

ahhh!!!

ok. two posts in like, three days. thats exciting.

i had a whole spiel, but then my comp went haywire,  so i'm only posting the story. thing.

wahoo.

Title: Smile
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[hypercollegegal]

awwww.... :( it made me want to cry for her. And hug her. And punch him in da face!!! *PUNCH*

I likes it! And you're right, it's not your "normal" style, but I think that's what makes it so intruiging. Because it's different...good different, though...Yay!

The smile lines got to me, though. I went awwww to the first one ("I smiled") and "noooo!!! *cries*" to the second one. *hug*

[doggie_dreams]

now the funny part is, with the second 'smile' line.....i have no idea why she didnt smile.

she just didnt. that line fit better than something like, "And I smiled back.."

so yea. it works.

thanx!

loves,
pads

Re: heh

[doggie_dreams]

love? as in you loved it?

yay. thats great.

and yes. you can make me nervous. but a good kind of nervovus

whats the nervous game?

Re: heh

[doggie_dreams]

no no....just cuz i can keep a straight face doesnt mean nothing was goin' on.