Fanfic ~ Akame: Uncertainty?

Nov 20, 2009 14:00

Title: Uncertainty? (oneshot ( Read more... )

akame, akanishi, kamenashi, fanfic, oneshot

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msdesireen November 20 2009, 03:36:09 UTC
I enjoyed reading this piece.
We often lost ourselves amidst all the nuances of life, and for many struggling to even live.
The insecurities, emptiness and loneliness that Kazuya felt is real.
But somehow, I feel that your piece lacked a little something...
Anyway good job!
Thanks for Sharing.
Oh, and I was glad Kazuya was able to find some comfort and peace in the end.

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doki_kiss November 20 2009, 07:01:26 UTC
Thank you for your comment :)

Even though this is my own writing i'd have to agree with you on the "lacked a little something.." i actually was going to make this a lot longer than what it is, but i got stuck. There was a lot more i wanted to write about both Jin and Kazuya, and also about kazuya's emotions, but i felt a little lost when i would try to express it.. all in all i think it was a good practice run for me haha~
thanks for reading~

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queen_kat_tun November 20 2009, 08:56:15 UTC
I liked this ^^ *faints*

I do agree that there are times when you start to doubt your feelings for someone you love...
It happens and Kazu's not exempted...
Anyway, thanks for this and hope you'll write more ^^

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doki_kiss November 21 2009, 04:03:03 UTC
I think it's only human to feel insecure, and there will always be a time when there is something that you want to be sure of but just don't know how

Thanks for commenting :)

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pochnaden November 20 2009, 12:11:01 UTC
it was so filled with feelings. i love it. :D thank you!

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doki_kiss November 21 2009, 04:03:50 UTC
glad you liked it! Thanks for reading ^___^

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doki_kiss November 21 2009, 04:07:41 UTC
it's a given that everyone will experience pain caused by loneliness and uncertainty at some point.. sometimes you just need to realize that there will always be someone who cares :)

thank you for commenting!

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kazuyachan February 12 2012, 08:24:09 UTC
I just wish the real kazuya is not feeling that way
I know that feeling
i felt it when my heart was broken
it was nothing emptiness loneliness hopeless helpless
I just hope they can move on
because life... Goes on
akame angsty much
thank u for sharing dear

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