I enjoyed reading this piece. We often lost ourselves amidst all the nuances of life, and for many struggling to even live. The insecurities, emptiness and loneliness that Kazuya felt is real. But somehow, I feel that your piece lacked a little something... Anyway good job! Thanks for Sharing. Oh, and I was glad Kazuya was able to find some comfort and peace in the end.
Even though this is my own writing i'd have to agree with you on the "lacked a little something.." i actually was going to make this a lot longer than what it is, but i got stuck. There was a lot more i wanted to write about both Jin and Kazuya, and also about kazuya's emotions, but i felt a little lost when i would try to express it.. all in all i think it was a good practice run for me haha~ thanks for reading~
I do agree that there are times when you start to doubt your feelings for someone you love... It happens and Kazu's not exempted... Anyway, thanks for this and hope you'll write more ^^
it's a given that everyone will experience pain caused by loneliness and uncertainty at some point.. sometimes you just need to realize that there will always be someone who cares :)
I just wish the real kazuya is not feeling that way I know that feeling i felt it when my heart was broken it was nothing emptiness loneliness hopeless helpless I just hope they can move on because life... Goes on akame angsty much thank u for sharing dear
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We often lost ourselves amidst all the nuances of life, and for many struggling to even live.
The insecurities, emptiness and loneliness that Kazuya felt is real.
But somehow, I feel that your piece lacked a little something...
Anyway good job!
Thanks for Sharing.
Oh, and I was glad Kazuya was able to find some comfort and peace in the end.
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Even though this is my own writing i'd have to agree with you on the "lacked a little something.." i actually was going to make this a lot longer than what it is, but i got stuck. There was a lot more i wanted to write about both Jin and Kazuya, and also about kazuya's emotions, but i felt a little lost when i would try to express it.. all in all i think it was a good practice run for me haha~
thanks for reading~
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I do agree that there are times when you start to doubt your feelings for someone you love...
It happens and Kazu's not exempted...
Anyway, thanks for this and hope you'll write more ^^
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I know that feeling
i felt it when my heart was broken
it was nothing emptiness loneliness hopeless helpless
I just hope they can move on
because life... Goes on
akame angsty much
thank u for sharing dear
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