Aspartame 3/8

[dokssuri]

Title: Aspartame
Pairing: ChunJae
Length: Chaptered
Summary: Jaejoong thinks he found just another sugar daddy to support him, but Yoochun is a different kind of sweet.

Comments

[ztarplay]

Call me a pessimist but I still don't trust Yoochun. Sigh. Though he seems awfully perfect! I'm curious though... what happened to Jaejoong? Hope we get to find out soon.

[blocassimere]

I don't know, I have no idea where is this heading to. And for some reason I feel nervous about what is going to happen in the next few chapters.

Yoochun is really sweet but his character is full of mystery. You haven't revealed much about his background. Is he real or something?

I hope JaeSu's friendship will not end just like that.

And this Hyunjoong, I don't know, his character gives off a negative vibe /sigh but anyway, thank you for updating, I've been waiting for this :)

[vizinga]

YC is hot, very hot. But JJ has problems, he pushes his best friend away. Not smart and not good.
Love this fic.

[n3uromanc3r]

I feel so lucky, I found this story yesterday, and now you updated again!

So he studies architecture indeed!
And I assume number eight is Mr. Lee...

And it seems the real problem is not the Hyunjoong-issue but number seven, judging by the conversation between Junsu and Jae the drastic changes in his life started when he met or broke up with that guy.

I'm still dissatisfied with the relationship between Junsu and Jae but somehow I'm happier now that Jae told him (admitted?) his secret.

And after reading the other comments with all the suspicion around Yoochun and I feel naive but I don't see anything suspicious in his behaviour. He's lonely, he's bored with rich girls/boys of his circle, he saw Jaejoong at that club and asked around a bit to get closer to him ... and at the end Jae was the one who chose - he could have rejected Yoochun how he did with so many others but he chose him.

[lemonademelon]

ooooh i'm very curious of number seven :3

and can Yoochun get any more perfect? :')