Comments | dokssuri: Lifeline 4/5

dokssuri

Lifeline 4/5

Nov 19, 2014 04:28

Title: Lifeline
Pairing: Yoochun/Jaejoong
Summary: One fatal accident leads Jaejoong to his soulmate, the next leaves him forty days to say goodbye. Or, in which Jaejoong dies twice and Yoochun saves him the first time.

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length: chaptered, pairing: yoochun/jaejoong

Comments 11

songbird52317 November 19 2014, 04:08:06 UTC

OK. This is beautiful and I'm crying again. I would really like a happy ending to this.

chatillionte November 19 2014, 04:22:02 UTC

YESS AND IT'S NOT EVEN OVER.
Spot btw.

chatillionte November 19 2014, 04:41:10 UTC

PLEASE DON'T KILL HIM. LIEK IS THERE ANY TYPE OF CEREMONY I CAN PERFORM TO CONVINCE YOU NOT TO BECAUSE THESE TWO ARE SO PRESH AND I'M DYING.

Also can I totally say you're writing has improved so much. I mean I always loved it but like with this fic and that one you did with JaeMin at the haunted castle I've been totally blown away.

BUT STILL PLZ DON'T KILL HIM. JAEJOONG FINALLY HAS A MOMMY IN LAW TO BE BFF'S WITH AND EVERYTHING. AND YOOCHUN NEEDS HIM HE'S HIS SOULMATE PLEAAASE <3

Anyway I understand if you must. Thank you so much for writing <3

dokssuri November 19 2014, 23:34:23 UTC

Haha, I'm afraid no ceremony would have helped, because I had already written parts of the ending by the time I started posting this, but you can now go see if you like what I did.

Thank you so much!! I think I still have a lot of improving to do, but I often wince when I read my older stuff. I take that as a good sign.

<3

be_ddelusionall November 19 2014, 05:31:44 UTC

I am so very glad this is 5 parts, but ugh, this was so emotional
but strangely, it was just what I needed today, so very much, so thank you! <3

creedee November 19 2014, 06:21:20 UTC

hiksss... okay author-nim, i'm actually crying right now.....

ohhh... jae..... *sigh* *likejaesaidi'moverwhelmed*

harunotenshi November 19 2014, 06:34:37 UTC

just when he has so little time left his dreams are, one by one, coming true. wow. will jaejoong really have to leave? he's slowly redeeming himself now and he has only a week left and both he and yoochun had just realized how deep their love is for each other... it'd be too sad if jaejoong wouldn't be there anymore and i can only imagine what yoochun will have to go through if jaejoong dies for real this time...

update again soon :)