Fic: From the Cold

Jun 21, 2010 22:34

Title: From the Cold
Fandom/original: Arthuriana
Rating: Gish, I think.
A/N: For rainbowjehan, so very, very late. Also, I have not quite hit my Bedivere voice yet, I don't think. So... rough.

The sun was setting, but Kay wasn't ready to go in just yet. )

character: kay, character: bedivere, fandom: arthuriana

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rainbowjehan June 23 2010, 02:40:31 UTC
Eeeeeeee you are so awesome and I love it. Makes me so happy! I love your Kay, he is totally awesome and ffff. Thank you. ♥

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angel_gospel July 7 2010, 00:43:30 UTC
This is great! You write very well, and I enjoyed the banter between Kay and Bedivere.

This part is probably my favorite: Sometimes, Kay wondered if it was just another game of pretend for him. Like being a hawk or a badger. Be king for awhile, Wart, see how it suits you. No wonder the damned Merlin always looked so smug.

But I also thought this was amusing: "Well. Kay. We should build a fire if we're going to camp. You might do with roughing it, but I doubt you'd want me to complain about my old bones all night. Unless you're going to take pity on me and come back to court."

As was this: "Fine. If Arthur is bound and determined to be my mother as well as the king, we'll go back." The idea of Arthur mothering his older foster brother is just adorable. xD I did always like a slightly childish Arthur.

And now I'm going to stop quoting, because I know I'm being annoying. xD Kudos.

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dolevalan July 7 2010, 01:05:56 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you so much for the lovely comment.

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eremon_lass July 25 2010, 03:47:57 UTC
Obviously I'm late in seeing this, but SQUEEEEEEEEEEEE! This is awesome and you should write more Kay fic.

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dolevalan July 25 2010, 13:32:44 UTC
So glad you enjoyed it!

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