a little tiny poem

Dec 14, 2004 23:31

if the stars would align
you'd believe it
you'd follow them like the lost little boy
you thought you'd stepped away from a long time ago
you'd construct a telescope
and craft their patterns through the glass
honey, they're shining for you and i
honey
our love can only be real
if it's mapped across the sky.

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rabblearouseme December 15 2004, 05:43:20 UTC
i love it! i only think and dont kill me for this, there should be a comma after a long time ago..its original and cohesive..awesome.

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dollface115 December 15 2004, 05:47:32 UTC
haha thank you... it's just something short, i dunno... HAHA you're such a dork... why put a comma after the end of a line!? i dunno, i'm not always big on punctuation in my poems. and hey... did you see my last two entries? they're friends only so sign in but there's mad pictures from my show in them... wanna talk to you...

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LEEMORE! falldownmylove December 16 2004, 12:13:37 UTC
I miss you so much! I can't wait to see you soon! your working at Papyrus again? thats very awsome. (i only read your last 2 entries, so i might be wrong)

I CANT WAIT TO FUCKING SEE YOU AGAIN!

Jenn Benn

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Re: LEEMORE! dollface115 December 16 2004, 21:41:51 UTC
jenn benn... can't wait to see you either, god, i miss you to death... i am working at papyrus... THANK GOD, just started yesterday and i have to go to bed right now because i'm opening tomorrow and i have to be up at 7 FUCKING 15. but it's such a great job. you'll have to visit and we'll do lunch, duh. ;o) and much more. i love you, sweets... we must plan soon.

-leelee

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tallawhatee December 17 2004, 21:49:42 UTC
yo i went to urbana and got 2, count em, 2 huge hugs from taylor...that made me happy. and i read my "obsessed with you" poem and the feature, paradox, told me it was a solid piece so that made me happy. read about it on my blog if you want. but next thursday, you coming to the semifinals with me? normal place n time babe.

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dollface115 December 19 2004, 09:49:16 UTC
that is so fucking great... ohmigod, i'm freaking out because i'm scheduled to work on the 30th but i'm gonna see if i can try to switch my shift from 1-10 to 9-6... but i dunno... AND THEN I CAN'T GO TO CRISTIN'S THING, NOOOOOO... but listen, i'm really gonna try to work it out. and then this thursday i can't fucking go either because my mom is picking me up with all my shit so i can go home... SHIT, WHAT'S HAPPENING TO OUR PLANS!??!!?!? i'm really gonna try to fix the 30th, i'll talk to my boss, i promise... i'm gonna cry... ;o(

-leems

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