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[dollsinameadow]

Title: How to Glide Like a Swan
Word Count: 1100 +
Rating: G
Summary: Donna teaches Josh to skate.
Disclaimer: Characters belong to Aaron Sorkin.

Comments

[dawn_walking]

"You're pretty good at this," Donna said with a smile."
"No! I've never been skating!" Josh yelled.

These are typical Josh/Donna phrase:) I totally got that feeling when they're together. Nice fic!!!

[dollsinameadow]

Thanks!! I was so nervous about this :D

[morethanexist]

Super cute and a great first fic. Good job.

[dollsinameadow]

Thank you!

Cute

[joshdonnalyman]

This is a cute fic but my one criticism is the size of the font. It's not too bad but I have very good vision, and I was straining to read towards the end.

Re: Cute

[dollsinameadow]

Thank you! And thanks for the font thing. I'll change it :D It's good to know people might have difficulty.

Re: Cute

[joshdonnalyman]

I forgot to mention it in my earlier response, but I hope you will be writing more soon. I always love reading fic though I have difficulty finishing my own :)

[allie83]

Great job with your first fic. I hope you continue to write :)

Great first fic

[jhulings]

You go girl taking Josh Lyman skating. Next time you may get him out on the ski slopes.

I enjoyed the story and will look forward to reading more of your work.