the WE COULD HAVE HAD IT A-A-ALL! comment ficathon

Feb 20, 2012 17:42

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merlin | gwen/morgana | with grace in your heart dollsome February 22 2012, 03:12:55 UTC
she tries to stay upright -- for so long she has been trying -- but everyone must fall sooner or later. she has always known that. she had only wanted to take them with her. with her -- here she is, at her ending, and they aren't. in spite of everything, she always thought--

she stumbles. she thinks of

"Gwen," Morgana says, holding back her laughter, putting on her most serious of expressions, "I really must insist upon it."

"Oh no you mustn't," Gwen says, swatting her away fondly. "I'm marrying the king in the great hall, not a farmer out in a field! I doubt all the nobles and courtiers will be impressed by Arthur marrying a peasant girl with flowers in her hair."

"Every single one of them should count their blessings every day," Morgana insists, tugging gently on a curl, "being lucky enough to breathe the same air as that peasant girl with flowers in her hair."

"Morgana, I can't!" Gwen protests, laughing, as Morgana places the daisy crown atop her head with great ceremony ( ... )

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Re: merlin | gwen/morgana | with grace in your heart oltha_heri February 22 2012, 04:01:38 UTC
Seriously, you couldn't just leave that middle scene and have it be happy. No you had to make it all excellent and really really good and angsty.

Oh but so gorgeous though, I love that opening paragraph cause ugh my poor poor bbs.

"here she is, at her ending, and they aren't. in spite of everything, she always thought--"
Just I'll be over here crying.

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